Castle of Frozen Rain

Here’s a poem i wrote recently. It’s quite different from my older poems because this one is more in a story form whereas my older poems are more about feelings. Read and enjoy it. If u have any comment, feel free to post a comment here! Or anywhere else…

My Confession

Janie held my hand

And told me a secret

She shot her boyfriend

With a loaded gun

That she’s still keeping

In his apartment

No one was there

No one saw it

As their argument

Slowly heated

She got angry

And she pulled it

The trigger went off

And knocked him unconscious

He laid motionless

In his own pool

Of blood

As Janie watched

In disgust

She locked the door

And ran away

And in my arms she stayed

She cried in sadness

“But he was a jerk”,

she said

I couldn’t do anything

But comfort her that day

For I know

I will be the one

To turn her in

And she will be sorry

For the rest of her life

For killing my fiancé

She shot him and he died

I won’t forgive you, Janie

For I almost became his wife

Now you will regret it

For the rest of your life

Repent dear Janie

Goodbye!

        Hey! Im sorry for not updating my blog fer some time now. Cant blame me cuz i got PMR ok! Before this i was so busy having to prepare fer the exam. On tuesday still got two more papers to go but look at me! Posting messages on my blog! I should have know better eh? Erm since i still got exams coming up, i wont put too much stuff on here just yet. But i wil after the exama ofcourse ; ) Ok here goes some interesting stuff. Maybe not so interesting. Ok watever.

Socialite
You scored 52% Do Gooder, 42% Drive, and 64% Intellect!

You like to flit from flower to flower. That’s right, I said ‘flit.’ You are a nice person with a kind heart, even if it does take you a little while to fully trust someone. When you do though, you like to share. And talking is a good suit with you, because you’d rather do that or sit and be entertained, then go out and do something. That’s right, you’re a bit on the lazy side. And there’s nothing too wrong with that as long as you decide to get up and do something when it really matters. As far as the categories on this test goes, a socialite is something to be proud of, but there are better humans, too.

All human being categories are: Lazy SOB, Rebel w/out a Cause, Evil Mastermind, Henchman, Criminal, Dictator, Frat Boy, Socialite, Philosopher, Stunt Double, Upstanding Citizen, Teacher, Cheerleader, Sister Mary DoGood, Benefactor, Loyal Sidekick, Candy Striper, Goody Two-Shoes.

My test tracked 3 variables How you compared to other people your age and gender: You scored higher than 8% on Do Gooder You scored higher than 7% on Drive You scored higher than 42% on Intellect

Link: The What Type of Human Are You? Test written by weeredIII on OkCupid Free Online Dating

Scrabble Wiz! You scored 70% on Your Biology Word Hoard! Great job! You’re heading for the top of the heap. You know most of the words for groups of animals and for their young. You’ll enjoy this wonderful book: An Exultation of Larks, which has all these answers and a lot more. It’s amusing, as well. You’re probably great at crossword puzzles, too. You don’t panic if you get a "q" or "z" in Scrabble, but once in a while you have to look things up. Please don’t forget to give me a rating! Continous improvement, that’s my motto, and I can’t do it without your feedback. And, if you liked this, you should go try my other test, The Other Urban Legends Test. (It’s a little easier.) My test tracked 1 variable How you compared to other people your age and gender: You scored higher than 53% on Word Hoard Link: The Clucks and Chicks Test written by notalady on Ok Cupid Stable You scored 22 paranioa, 23 openness, and 60 self awareness! You are very trusting in your partner and confident in your relationship. However you might want to work on your openness and realizing what you feel. You are stable in relationships. My test tracked 3 variables How you compared to other people your age and gender: You scored higher than 62% on paranioa You scored higher than 2% on openness You scored higher than 6% on self awareness Link: The How Emotionaly Stable Are You Test written by joe1001 on Ok Cupid

Advanced You scored 92% Beginner, 100% Intermediate, 80% Advanced, and 60% Expert!

You have an extremely good understanding of beginner, intermediate, and advanced level commonly confused English words, getting at least 75% of each of these three levels’ questions correct. This is an exceptional score. Remember, these are commonly confused English words, which means most people don’t use them properly. You got an extremely respectable score. Thank you so much for taking my test. I hope you enjoyed it! For the complete Answer Key, visit my blog: http://shortredhead78.blogspot.com/.

My test tracked 4 variables How you compared to other people your age and gender: You scored higher than 26% on Beginner You scored higher than 48% on Intermediate You scored higher than 9% on Advanced You scored higher than 14% on Expert

Link: The Commonly Confused Words Test written by shortredhead78 on Ok Cupid