Castle of Frozen Rain

Here’s a poem i wrote recently. It’s quite different from my older poems because this one is more in a story form whereas my older poems are more about feelings. Read and enjoy it. If u have any comment, feel free to post a comment here! Or anywhere else…

My Confession

Janie held my hand

And told me a secret

She shot her boyfriend

With a loaded gun

That she’s still keeping

In his apartment

No one was there

No one saw it

As their argument

Slowly heated

She got angry

And she pulled it

The trigger went off

And knocked him unconscious

He laid motionless

In his own pool

Of blood

As Janie watched

In disgust

She locked the door

And ran away

And in my arms she stayed

She cried in sadness

“But he was a jerk”,

she said

I couldn’t do anything

But comfort her that day

For I know

I will be the one

To turn her in

And she will be sorry

For the rest of her life

For killing my fiancé

She shot him and he died

I won’t forgive you, Janie

For I almost became his wife

Now you will regret it

For the rest of your life

Repent dear Janie

Goodbye!

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